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Many teenagers now have their smart phones. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your opinion.

#teenagers #phones
In
this
 modern era, electronic gadgets play a vital role in everyday life.
Smartphone
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is
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 one of these devices which are easy to carry and have a huge amount of access to various things. Despite its advantages, mobile affect young people's behaviour towards
another person
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other people
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. The evident benefit of providing
smart
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phones
 to teenagers is that
parents
 can take care of their
kids
while
 they are away from them. Young
kids
 can ask for them from their
parents
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 if they are facing any problems.
Moreover
, these days schools are sharing information on websites, which allows teenagers to use more
phones
. Even though, young
kids
 are using different types of phone applications to get help studying and learning new skills virtually. These gadgets are full of information, if it is used in the right way.
Nevertheless
, mobile
phones
 changed teenagers' behaviour and kept them busy with social networking. Young
kids
 spend most of their time on screens, which impacts their physical and mental health. It affects their performance in academics to some extent and makes them rely on social gadgets for every piece of knowledge.
Consequently
, it
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 their power to think to solve any problem in their life. They get trapped by social media after excessive use. In conclusion,
smart
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phones
 should be used under parent's supervision only for any kind of learning purpose. It will help
kids
 to get more time to interact with their
parents
 and learn from their surroundings. if
parents
 are away, they must track their children's phone activities with applications.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Smartphones
  • Instant access
  • Educational apps
  • Enhanced communication
  • Navigation
  • Tech skills
  • Distraction
  • Productivity
  • Inappropriate content
  • Cyberbullying
  • Privacy concerns
  • Overreliance
  • Social skills
  • Double-edged sword
  • Responsibly
  • Mitigate
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