The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
These two maps depict the changes
of
the coastal village of Ryemouth from 1995 until now.
It is clearly seen that Change preposition
in
this
area has increased the total number of living houses, and it has been spread also
more on
the west.
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to
Instead
of farmland and forest
park, there was a newly built golf and tennis court.
The Correct article usage
a forest
hotel
guests have had a new opportunity to park their vehicles immediately near the hotel
.
The shops along the road were replaced by restaurants, and the fish market has been changed into the
apartments right Correct article usage
apply
on
Change preposition
apply
the
opposite the restaurants. Not surprisingly, the fishing port behind the apartments was Correct article usage
apply
canceled
, and the beach Change the spelling
cancelled
has been
provided with apartments and Wrong verb form
was
hotel
guests.
The cafe has remained on the coast near the hotel
.
To sum up
, the village of Ryemouth
has been totally rebuilt in favour of inhabitants and tourists, and it has increased their comfort.Correct your spelling
Tynemouth
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