The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.
"The line graph provides a comparison of the fast food
consumption
of teenagers in Australia between 1975 and 2000, a period of 25 years.
From the graph it can plainly viewed
that the Wrong verb form
be seen
consumption
of fish
and chips
declined whereas
the amount of pizza and hamburgers eaten soared over the period.
In 1975, the most popular fast food with Australian teenagers was fish
and chips
, being eaten a
100 times a year. Correct article usage
apply
This
was far higher than pizza and hamburgers, which were consumed approximately 5 times a year. However
, apart from a brief rise again from 1980 to 1985, the consumption
of fish
and chips
gradually declined over the 25-year timescale to finish at just under 40.
In sharp contrast to this
, teenagers ate other
two fast foods at much higher levels. Pizza Correct article usage
the other
consumption
increased gradually until it overtook the consumption
of fish
and chips
in 1990. It then
levelled off from 1995 to 2000. The biggest rise was seen in hamburgers as the occasions they were eaten increased sharply throughout the 1970's
/ Fix apostrophe usage
1970s
1980's
, exceeding that of Fix apostrophe usage
1980s
fish
and chips
in 1985. It finished at the same level that fish
and chips
began, with consumption
of 100 times a year."Submitted by Farzaneh Ka on
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