The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development
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There are two maps both maps show the construction of the building change from the Islip town centre now will illustrate the plans for the development of the building.
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, there are several differences between the space and place in the room.
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with, in the north Islip town centre, there are two conveniences separated by the main road.
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, the east part of the building has a park located opposite it, there is a school which is the south part, and you can get there through the main road. But before that, you will pass the house which has a big location in the area.
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, about the plan of changing the building, there are a lot of changes from the map before
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as the Bus station, Shopping centre, and Car park located on the north side. Opposite
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part which is the south side there is Housing, New housing, and a small park. these parts are separated by the circumference of the road.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Small town
  • Centre
  • Development
  • Maps
  • Plans
  • Introduce
  • Topic
  • Purpose
  • Essay
  • Description
  • Current
  • Key features
  • Facilities
  • Advantages
  • Positive aspects
  • Benefits
  • Proposed
  • Changes
  • Improvements
  • Suggested
  • Potential
  • Course of action
  • Summarize
  • Opinion
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