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The two given line charts illustrate data regarding the percentage of the variations held in electrical appliances ownership and the duration of time spent
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three different types of Change the verb form
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houseworks
in a single nation from 1920 to 2019.
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of the percentage of households, the two noticeable, increasing figures were a refrigerator and a vacuum cleaner. Fix the agreement mistake
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