The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.
The bar chart depicts the distribution of teacher's gender in a variety of educational environments in the United Kingdom during the year 2010.
Overall
, it is clearly apparent that there are big gaps between male and female lectures. The highest and lowest belong to males and females in the nursery respectively.
Turning to the details, First,
the most noticeable disparity is in the proportion of teachers
in preschool and primary school, the number of male teachers
in these two formal education
is a little less than 10%, Change the determiner
this two formal education
meanwhile
the number of female Add a comma
meanwhile,
teachers
is almost 100%. The gaps decrease in secondary school where the difference between this gender
is approximately 10%. In college, the Fix the agreement mistake
these genders
distributionbecame
equal, where male and female lecturers had the same percentage, which was around 50%. Correct your spelling
distribution became
Furthermore
, there is an upward trend belong to male lecturers in private training institutes and universities. In university, male teachers
assert their dominance in number, it is around 70% while
the female is just over 20%Submitted by nientjeninan on
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