Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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traffic pollution, some people think

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increasing the price of petrol is a ideal way to deal with

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problem, I agree that the

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of raising oil prices will make the Earth's residents

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unwilling to drive their own cars, which

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leading the road to be less crowded than ever before. First of all, the citizens will be more

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satisfied with driving their own vehicles to avoid paying the expensive oil fees, which forces

cities

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residents to take public transportation so that they can save money to maintain the living quality.

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, the policy gives an opportunity to

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air pollution where around the roads and even the whole world, which is a huge beneficial reason why the residents would agree with the government

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this

strategy.

Moreover

, the reducing of individual

atuomobiles

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automobiles

is an improving perspective in order to let some people feel much

quiter

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quieter

, thanks to the low

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of

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transporation

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transportation

, the towns or the cities would be more liveable because there are few cars on the roads, the individuals' happiness is a great reason why the authorities keep

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developing

the price of the petrol.

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, in the Netherlands, the fees of

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fuels

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that

provides

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to

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vehicles

is

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extremely expensive, since the significant

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of

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has become more willing to take buses, the growth of the living satisfaction

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lifts hugely and

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world

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travellers to visit the Netherlands.

Overall

, I firmly believe that the strategy is very effective for solving

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traffic and

enviornmental

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environmental

pollution.

Additionally

, the policy fosters high-quality living environments in the nations where it is implemented.

This

approach effectively balances nature and urban areas.