The bar chart provides an analysis of electricity generation and usage levels by the Top 10 global energy users in 2014.
The figure illustrates an analysis of production and consumption of
electricity
levels by the Top 10 most energy-user nations
in 2014.
Looking from an overall
perspective it is readily apparent that the amount of generation of electricity
among all nations
was higher than usage except Germany.
From the given graph it can be seen that China got the first rank in producing electricity
and also
the highest number with about 5.398 in 2014. In this
year the USA was the second country among all 10 nations
, with around 4.099 and the lowest amount of production was in Korea Rep by 485.1 in the given year.
Nevertheless
, China still got the first rank in the consumption part too. This
county almost used 5.322 in 2014. And
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electricity
during the given year. However
, all nations
, nearly used whatever they produced bout Germany's usage, the number was higher than production.Submitted by mahsa.ghorbandoust71 on
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