The bar chart provides an analysis of electricity generation and usage levels by the Top 10 global energy users in 2014.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart provides an analysis of electricity generation and usage levels by the Top 10 global energy users in 2014.

The figure illustrates an analysis of production and consumption of

electricity

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levels by the Top 10 most energy-user

nations

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in 2014. Looking from an

overall

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perspective it is readily apparent that the amount of generation of

electricity

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among all

nations

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was higher than usage except Germany. From the given graph it can be seen that China got the first rank in producing

electricity

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and

also

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the highest number with about 5.398 in 2014. In

this

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year the USA was the second country among all 10

nations

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, with around 4.099 and the lowest amount of production was in Korea Rep by 485.1 in the given year.

Nevertheless

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, China still got the first rank in the consumption part too.

This

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county almost used 5.322 in 2014.

And

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Also

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also

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the USA was the second nation in the

using

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apply

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field of

electricity

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during the given year.

However

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, all

nations

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, nearly used whatever they produced bout Germany's usage, the number was higher than production.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, nations with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

159 words

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