Some people believe the benefits of tourism outweigh the problems it creates in a particular place. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

With the ever-increasing number of

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who partake in different

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tourism

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activities, it has

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the

benefits

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and drawbacks of

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tourism

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. Some

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mentioned that

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believes

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the

benefits

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of

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is exceeded

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the total drawbacks of

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, especially creates job opportunities and boosts

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economical

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development

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.

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, others maintained that

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may pollute the environment and formulates the issues of

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overtourism

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over-tourism

over tourism

. In view of the potential advantages of

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is numerous and prolonged time, I

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strongly agree that

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brings

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advantages

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that outweight

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outweight

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outweigh

the disadvantages.

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with, the prime

benefits

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of

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is

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to enhance the employment rate and directly

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the economic

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in a particular country or city. It is because

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tourism

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can attract more

tourists

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to different spectacular, memorable and remarkable scenic spots.

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, Hong Kong Disneyland Resort and Ocean Park are the three main

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tourism

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scenic spots for

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various

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to various

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tourists

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to join their activities. Different shopping points can stimulate the population flow and the total

amount

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of tourist consumption.

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,

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the statistics conducted by the University of Hong Kong, 90% of respondents claimed that

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can stimulate and revitalise the local economy by appealing

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kinds of

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and they can have

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the ability

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to buy different things to flourish the economy

development

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. The more

tourists

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buy, the more local economic

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enjoy. It is no exaggeration to say that it not only lets

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can

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have

positive

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shopping experience

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but

also

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benefits

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to

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the diverse economic

development

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and gross domestic market.

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,

tourism

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is very positive to the economic

developement

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development

.

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,

depsite

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despite

the huge

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of

benefits

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and potential that

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in the above statement,

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tourism

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may

also

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threaten the chances of environmental

pollutions

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pollution

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and showcases the issues of

over

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particularly. The reasons why some busy, booming and developed countries may have the underlying root problems of

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over-tourism

over tourism

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many scenic spots, theme

park

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parks

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and without the higher travelling fee and

cost

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costs

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,

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producing quite a lot of environmental problems. To cite an example,

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London Bridge in Britain has encountered

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similiar

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similar

issues and as a results need to be added the travelling cost with providing tax. Yet, another example,

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Hong Kong, it is

universially

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universally

acknowledged that

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not only

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the chances of having some

overtourists

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over tourists

who join in the lower travelling cost and price by some Chinese Mainlander Traveller,

they

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but they also

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can not have any higher consumption power

with

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by

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providing

huge

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amount

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of environmental pollution, like

increasing

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amount

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of plastic bottles, plastic rubbish that kinds of things which can't solve in the

hygriene

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hygiene

landfills.

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, the total

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of rubbish will be increased.

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,

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tourism

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indeed exists

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on the

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darkside

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dark side

.

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, all things concluded that

tourism

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may have

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benefits

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or drawbacks aspects, which brings in the economic and environmental aspects.

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, the

drawside

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drawbacks

of

tourism

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may include

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overtourism and environmental problems. Certainly, the

benefits

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of

tourism

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may give you

positive

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a positive

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amount

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of job

oppportunities

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opportunities

and

enhances

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the

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economic growth.

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, it is advisable that

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should balance with the local economy and design the guidance to the

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so that they can not only bear the responsibility of buying

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things

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,

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but

also

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concerns

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the local environment.