The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and

2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and

the charts show how it was distributed.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
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The table gives us information regarding the police funding allocation sectors of a particular region in England,
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the pie charts illustrate the percentage of the expenditure in three different categories, both commencing from 2017 to 2018.
Overall
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, there was a rise in the total amount of the police budget, compared to the downward rates in the sector of job salaries. It can be seen from the table that the total of one of
the
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Britain's area
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in 2017 and 2018 was more than 300
million
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in both years. Sitting as the main contributor of the funds, domestic governance reached 180
million
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pounds, followed by local taxes which started at around 91%, and
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increased just above 10
million
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pounds a year later. Meanwhile, other sources only contributed under 40
million
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pounds throughout the period.
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, in both years, the majority of the money was used for the employees' salaries.
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, the figures were slightly decreased to approximately 6% in 2018 and given to the technology aspect, which rose by about 14%. The only sector that remained static was the buildings and transport sector, unchanged by around 17% in the period of time.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fiscal allocations
  • Revenue streams
  • Budgetary oversight
  • Expenditure
  • Financial appropriation
  • Government grants
  • Local taxation
  • Operational costs
  • Capital investment
  • Public safety
  • Crime prevention
  • Community policing
  • Resource allocation
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Budgetary constraints
  • Fiscal year
  • Fund disbursement
  • Budget deficit/surplus
  • Trend analysis
  • Financial sustainability
  • Law enforcement funding
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