The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Graph illustrates the two possible places for the supermarket for the individuals of Garlsdon.
The image depicts that two workable places are marked for the supermarkets S1 and S2 respectively which will be available for the people of Garlsdon.One place is within the housing field and the other is out of town with less population area of 12km to Hindon.
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, the map reveals that the S2 location will be more useful for the inhabitants of the city.Because it will be between the crowded zone and train station and main road Linking Words
also
approaches it.Linking Words
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, almost 44 thousand residents will be able to do shopping from here.Linking Words
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on the other hand
,S1 is outside the housing and industry sector. It will be situated between the main road and the railway track.It will be harder for the public to go there or go back with a lot of goods.
In my opinion, S2 is a more valuable place for the market rather than S1 Linking Words
due to
the easy approach and community of the 2 areas Cransdon and Bransdon can come there easily.Linking Words
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