The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

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pie

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provides data on the

amount

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of household

energy

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used by

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Australians

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,

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the second

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illustrates the greenhouse

gas

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emission

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emissions

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which is produced from

this

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energy

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.

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, it can be

distingushed

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distinguished

that there is no direct

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between the proportion of using a kind of

energy

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and the

amount

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of

greenhous

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greenhouse

gas

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production by it. It means that, the one which contains a noticeable part of the

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dose

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does

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not result in more

green house

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greenhouse

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gas

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necessarily. Looking

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the first

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, it can be distinguished that the most

amount

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of

energy

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is consumed in heating at 42%. The other considerable consuming is in water heating which includes nearly

one third

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of the

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. After that, Other appliances

goes

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to the third place at 15%.

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, refrigeration,cooling and heating contain less than 10% which is 7%, 4%,

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and 2

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% respectively. Moving to the second

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,

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demonstrates,

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although

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that although

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heating is highest

in using

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use

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, the proportion of its greenhouse

gas

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emission

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emissions

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is 15%. The

most

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highest

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percentage in

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chart

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is related to water heating,at 32%,

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the

amount

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of

energy

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consuming

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by it is lower. The other

signficant

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significant

percentage is in other

appliences

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appliances

, at 28% which is not

using

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used

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that much

comparing

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compared

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to other household energies

as well as

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refregeration

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refrigeration

containing 14% of the

amount

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of greenhouse

gas

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emissions.