The graph shows the differencies in wheat export over the three areas
The line graph compares three areas (
Australia
, Canada
, and European
Correct article usage
the European
Community
) in terms of their wheat export
from 1985 to 1990.
Overall
, Canada
and European
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the European
Community
showed a fluctuation of
exports ending Change preposition
in
European
Community
has the highest export
, Fix the agreement mistake
exports
while
Australia
experienced a steady declining.
In 1985, the wheat export
of Fix the agreement mistake
exports
Austalia
, Correct your spelling
Australia
Canada
and European
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the European
Community
were 15, nearly 17 and nearly 19 respectively. By 1986, both Canada
and European
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the European
Community
experienced a decrease to around 14 and around 18 respectively, while
Australia
showed a slight increase.
In 1988 Canada
's export
increased sharply and reached Fix the agreement mistake
exports
its
peak at 25 and Correct pronoun usage
their
then
plunged sharply to around 14 in 1989 before it
began to rise.
Correct pronoun usage
they
Australia
started as the lowest in 1985 at 15 and experienced a slightly
rise in 1986. Change the adverb
slight
However
, it began to steadily declined
Change the verb
decline
throughtout
the period.
In 1985, Correct your spelling
throughout
European
Correct article usage
the European
Community
started at nearly 17 and then
experienced a steady rise and by 1990 became the areas
with the highest wheat Fix the agreement mistake
area
export
around
21%.Change preposition
at around
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