The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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These two bar graphs illustrate the figures of graduate and postgraduate

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pupils

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didn't

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after finishing their higher studies in 2008 in the United

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Kingdom

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, most of the

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who did complete their higher education have focused on their

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them to choose not to

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, few graduates and postgraduates had

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work

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time

because of their charity

work

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, in 2008 graduate

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post-graduate

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mainly focused on more studies and

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considerable

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focused on

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part-time

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jobs,

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is 17,735 and 2535

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respectively

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, most of the

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have started to

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full-time

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time

after completing their postgraduate degrees.

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lesser job opportunities in the market

also

have impacted them to

work

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. It was 15,235

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graduate

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and 1,625 postgraduate

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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not real needs of the society in which they are sold. to what extent do you agree or disagree relevant examples from your own knowledge or experienece.