The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their graduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the Anthropologists in work after five years.
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Shown below is a chart depicting the destination of Anthropology
graduates
in a university and a table revealing the salaries of the graduates
.
From the chart, we can conclude that most of the students
are working full time once they finish their studies, with a percentage reaching 52% of the total graduates
. However
, a percentage of 15% of graduates
are working part-timetime
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part-time time
part-time-time
instead
. A minority of the students
decided to continue their studies, with only 8% of the students
doing so. There are also
students
who prefer doing both, where 5 % of the graduates
are working part-timetime
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part-time
while
also
continuing their degree. Nevertheless
, 12% of the students
are still figuring out their next step and remain unemployed.
We can also
interpret from the table that the salaries of the alumna vary from $25,000 to $100,000. The government sector produces the highest amount of Anthropology alumnus
with a wage above $100,000, reaching 50% of the total working grad. Consulting has Fix the agreement mistake
alumni
also
become an interest for the
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graduates
, with 40% of the consulting grad
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Students
working in private companies tend to receive lesser salaries with only 30% of the graduates
receiving $100,000 as their income.
In conclusion, most of the Anthropology students
are working full time. With the amount of pay reaching to
more than $100,000.Change preposition
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