Some people think that increasing business and cultural contacts worldwide have positive influences on development; others think that they have negative effects on national identities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the globalized society, the issue of increasing

business

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and cultural

communication

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worldwide has sparked considerable debate. Some argue that increasing

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among countries fosters development both in personal and professional settings.

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, others contend that exposure to the

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of other countries too much will greatly negatively affect the acknowledgement of domestic history and

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.

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essay will delve into both views deeply Proponents hold the view that emphasizing

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communication

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worldwide positively cultivates the development at individual,

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enterprise

and

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level

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. At the individual level, worldwide information exchange and multiple languages

communication

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improve the ability of critical thinking and

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learning. At the enterprise level, the popular trend of international trade and international companies provide more employment opportunities domestically.

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,

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of one

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will

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be fostered by increasing economic benefits of importation and exportation.

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, some assert that the history and

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of the native

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tend to be easily forgotten by the invasion of the exterior

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.

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,

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the increasing exposure to

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culture

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, most young adults are more likely to celebrate Christmas

instead

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of some Chinese traditional festival. The history of the original

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Dragon

festival

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has been forgotten by

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younger population. In my opinion,

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the

acknowledgment

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of domestic

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and identity is paramount, I highly agree that the positive side of increasing

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and

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contacts worldwide prioritizes the downside. In the

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setting, strengthening international

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will provide domestic industries more opportunities to step out of the

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and build long-term strategic relationships with other partners abroad, maintaining sustainable development in the national economy.

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, encouraging cultural

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not only helps people learn more about exterior

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but

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builds bridges to let foreigners know more about their own

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. It is indispensable to highlight the importance of propagating domestic

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properly through public education rather than limiting the chance to communicate worldwide to avoid the erosion of exterior

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. In conclusion,

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increasing

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in

business

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culture

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setting

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has some negative

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effects

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in

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the

acknowledgment

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of national identity so far, the positive effect outperforms its downside by improving the personal and

country

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delopment

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development

under correct guidance.