Human activities have led negative effects on plant and animals all over the world. Some people think it is too late to do something about it. Others think there is still some time to take actions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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plants

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and

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are negatively affected by human activities around the globe.

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some express that we do not have time to deal with

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problem, others say that still have a

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to overcome it.

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essay discusses both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons.

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with, the environment is affected by human activities

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plants

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and

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are affected negatively, we do not have time to tackle

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issue

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because the population have polluted the air and cut the

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due to

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increasing population.

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means the

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is altered by human residential places,

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, the air is polluted by the increasing number of private vehicles on the road,

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,

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and

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are affected already and they lost their mother place and they captivated by cages

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of the

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.

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, many rare

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are being endangered

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deforestation by

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.

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, folks do not have time to prevent

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issue

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because it

is already happened

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and these are affected already too.

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, still have a

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to tackle

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issue

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. The authorities should

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a law against mankind who cut trees in

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area

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so that deforestation can be stopped.

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people should use public transportation rather than private cars in order

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pollution ratio might be reduced and

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animals

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and

plants

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alarming rate is diminished.

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, the government encourages to the population use the carpool method, and

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, pollution will

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. The authorities and the common folks are together to overcome

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problem indeed.

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,

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humans already affected the environment by pollution and deforestation, so, there is no

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to solve

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issue

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, the ruling party and humankind are together to solve

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issue

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by using

the

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apply

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public transportation and a strict law against

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those who cut trees.

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, in my opinion, about

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, I strongly agree that there is still a

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to overcome

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trouble by the authorities and individuals are together to overcome it.