Human activities have led negative effects on plant and animals all over the world. Some people think it is too late to do something about it. Others think there is still some time to take actions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The

plants

and

animals

are negatively affected by human activities around the globe.

While

some express that we do not have time to deal with

this

problem, others say that still have a

chance

to overcome it.

This

essay discusses both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons.

To begin

with, the environment is affected by human activities

while

plants

and

animals

are affected negatively, we do not have time to tackle

this

issue

because the population have polluted the air and cut the

forest

due to

increasing population.

This

means the

forest

is altered by human residential places,

likewise

, the air is polluted by the increasing number of private vehicles on the road,

consequently

,

plants

and

animals

are affected already and they lost their mother place and they captivated by cages

instead

of the

forest

.

For example

, many rare

animals

are being endangered

due to

deforestation by

human

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humans

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.

Therefore

, folks do not have time to prevent

this

issue

because it

is already happened

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and these are affected already too.

In contrast

, still have a

chance

to tackle

this

issue

. The authorities should

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enact

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a law against mankind who cut trees in

forest

area

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areas

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so that deforestation can be stopped.

Also

people should use public transportation rather than private cars in order

to

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pollution ratio might be reduced and

animals

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the animals

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and

plants

alarming rate is diminished.

For instance

, the government encourages to the population use the carpool method, and

as a result

, pollution will

reduce

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. The authorities and the common folks are together to overcome

this

problem indeed.

To conclude

,

although

humans already affected the environment by pollution and deforestation, so, there is no

chance

to solve

this

issue

, the ruling party and humankind are together to solve

this

issue

by using

the

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public transportation and a strict law against

of

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those who cut trees.

Therefore

, in my opinion, about

this

, I strongly agree that there is still a

chance

to overcome

this

trouble by the authorities and individuals are together to overcome it.