The maps show the village park 10 years ago and the village car park now.
The given maps illustrate the comparison of the
village
park
layout between ten years ago and the current condition.
Overall
it can be clearly seen that there are several new facilities were built, existing sports courts were enlarged, and some of them were replaced with another.
In terms of the village
park
a decade ago, the park
was in a square shape with an entrance on the northwest of the park
. Football
pitch is situated in the Add an article
The football
A football
center
of the Change the spelling
centre
park
. Moreover
, a car park
can be found to the south near the entrance, with a capacity of 20 cars. Two tennis courts were located in the middle north of the park
with a children
's play area
next to the east. Lastly
, Woods and Pond lay closed
Replace the word
close
with
the football pitch, to the southeast and south of it, respectively.
Regarding the present layout of the Change preposition
to
village
park
, the tennis court was expanded twice as before. The car park
also
experienced the same development, enlarged, and could provide for 50 cars. A cafe and toilet are built at the expense of wood, whereas
a pond now is utilized for boating bikes. Furthermore
, children's
play Correct article usage
the children's
area
was renovated and separated into two areas, the children
's park
and the children
's soft area
. New facilities were built on the southwest corner of the park
for a picnic area
and a cycle path surrounding the village
park
. Lastly
, the football pitch is the only unchanged facility.Submitted by 2024successielts on
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