The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980, with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates details about energy consumption in the United States from a 2008 report since 1980, with
prediction
until 2030.
Fix the agreement mistake
predictions
Overall
, the graph clearly reveals that,
petrol and oil , coal and natural gas Remove the comma
apply
consumptions
Fix the agreement mistake
consumption
are
increased gradually and Verb problem
have
expected
to increase. Add a missing verb
are expected
Whereas
nuclear, solar, wind and hydropower consumptions
are constant over the period
and predicted
to Remain constant.
Petrol, oil and coal Add a missing verb
are predicted
consumptions
increased gradually over the Fix the agreement mistake
consumption
period
from 1980 to 2008 with 35 to around 50 quadrillions units and just above 15 to over 25 quadrillions units each respectively and moreover
, both are predicted to rise in consumptions
over the years until 2030. Fix the agreement mistake
consumption
Likewise
, natural gas consumption has increased with little fluctuations over the period
.
Furthermore
, four different energies which are nuclear, solar, wind and hydropower consumptions
remained constant over the period
from 1980 to 2008 with just above 5 quadrillion units at the same time it is predicted to remain constant over the period
of years until 2030.Submitted by insighttribez on
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