Task 1: The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The
table
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illustrate
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illustrates
careers
of Antrophology graduates after finishing their studies Correct article usage
the careers
from
one university Change preposition
at
while
Linking Words
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table
Correct article usage
the table
give
us information Change the verb form
gives
the
wages of the Change preposition
on the
antrophologists
employees, namely freelance Correct your spelling
anthropologists
anthropologist
consultans
, government sector and private companies.
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consultants
consultant
Overall
, the highest percentage from the chart is full-time work Linking Words
while
the lowest number is part-time work and Linking Words
post graduate
study. From the Add a hyphen
post-graduate
table
, there are 3 types of employment that show huge different salaries.
It can be seen from the pie chart that more than half of the graduates Use synonyms
working
as full-time Wrong verb form
work
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worker
, which makes Fix the agreement mistake
workers
this
percentage Linking Words
is
the largest. Unnecessary verb
apply
In addition
, the Linking Words
propotion
of full-time master study is the same as not known jobs. Correct your spelling
proportion
Similarly
, unemployed and part-time Linking Words
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worker
are only 3 Fix the agreement mistake
workers
percent
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per cent
differences
where Replace the word
different
part-time
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the part-time
a part-time
worker
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is
bigger than the employed. The Unnecessary verb
apply
last
position is 5% of part-time Linking Words
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worker
including Fix the agreement mistake
workers
post graduate
study which is the smallest one among them.
Correct your spelling
postgraduate
Besides
that, there is data from Linking Words
Use synonyms
table
, Add an article
a table
the table
it is clear that
35% of people who work at private companies got salaries between 50.000 - 74.999 dollars that makes them the hugest in Linking Words
Linking Words
this
numbers. Freelance consultants and Correct determiner usage
these
government
sector Correct article usage
the government
are in
the same wages which is 15%. Verb problem
have
This
is similar to wages from 25.000 dollars to 49.999 dollars. The other salaries have 5-10% different shares. Linking Words
Futhermore
, they got Correct your spelling
Furthermore
bonus
which Fix the agreement mistake
bonuses
dominated
by Add a missing verb
are dominated
Use synonyms
worker
in Fix the agreement mistake
workers
government
sector.Correct article usage
the government
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words table, worker with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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