Some people say the Olympic games are not relevant in the 21st century. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that
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Olympic
games
are
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outdated
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and don't belong to
this
current century we living
on
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. I believe that the Olympic
games
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Games
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changes
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it
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its
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purpose to fit the 21st century.
Nowaday
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this
sport
event
is a dream for any
atheltic
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athletic
athlete
to be
apart
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a part
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of it, It is an
opporitinty
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opportunity
for them to gain medals and fame,and it is
sponcers
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sponsors
by
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
governments
of every nation
became
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it is a
way
for countries to use
there
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their
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wining
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winning
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teams as soft
power
, they support there
sport
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sports
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team to wins as many gold
medalic
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medals
medalist
medallic
to show there excellent in every field. When it
come
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to
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Olympic
games
, it
is serve
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an international purpose for every country to gather in one place,and
celeberate
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celebrate
and support sports and
athelic
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athletic
athletics
, it is the most
importan
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important
event
for
this
athelic
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athletic
to shine and show
there
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their
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talent,and make
there
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their
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nation proud.
this
event
make
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countries spend money and
resoures
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resources
, to help the athelic to win
compotions
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competitions
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,and it is a
soures
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source
sources
of income for
this players
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this player
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, to
focuse soley
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focus solely
in
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on
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there
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their
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field and
experity
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experience
.
for example
, there is a Jamaican man called Bullet,
becouse
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because
his
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he
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is the fastest runner in the
Olmpics
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Olympics
and
wins
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has won
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many times,
nows
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now
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many
sport
wear companies have
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contract
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with him, and he shows in many ads, his
proforment
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preformed
preferment
in the
games
changes his life to the better.
in
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the other hand, nations compiting
agaist
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against
others not throw hard
power
like war, but
throw
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throwing
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soft
power
, and
sport
event
is a
way
for nations specially
wealthly
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wealthy
and
powerfull
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powerful
nations to
shows
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show
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there
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their
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suppurity
throgh
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through
wining in the
games
and have as
many
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much
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gold as possible. for
inscent
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instance
, in the
cold war
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Cold War
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between
US
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the US
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and Sociat
Unine
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Union
,
there
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their
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athelts
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allies
where
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were
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compiting
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competing
with each
others
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other
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to
wins
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win
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over the
othere
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other
others
. it is
kind
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a kind
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of
symblic
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symbolic
wining and nation pride to be better than your
enemey
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enemy
enemies
in
sport
. In
concluion
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conclusion
,
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Olympic
games
is
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are
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a
way
for the best
athelts
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athletes
gain
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to gain
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fame and wealth, and it is a
way
for countries
show
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to show
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there
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their
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soft
power
throw
there wining
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their winning
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players and teams.
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