Some people think that increasing business and cultural contacts worldwide have positive influences on development; others think that they have negative effects on national identities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In some countries

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believe that the power of global connection in both trading and customs prospects

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advantages for countries’ improvement. There are many downsides to

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perspective, but in my experience, I totally agree

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overall

it has had

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on commerce.

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essay explains the positive and negative aspects

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buying and selling and

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strongly agree with them. Nowadays, businessmen and employees in occupation

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fields

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to communicate

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clients, suppliers, and

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accompanies in several countries around the globe. international links are significantly important to

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receive

a lot of new opportunities.

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in particular

,

import-export

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industry has led to

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higher revenues in many overseas because Contacting

to

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various suppliers

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stronger

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power and they are likely to receive good quality products with lower costs;

then

, they can get higher margins and profits from selling.

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, others feel that there are several drawbacks

from

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the worldwide contacts. They are quite conservative and difficult to accept the modern scheme.

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, they believe that

interfering

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from foreigners brings the loss of national identities

particulary

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particularly

particular

cultural

prospect

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.

Consequently

,different beliefs and ethnics from other countries can change people’s way of thinking which

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to the merging of original nationality cultures. In conclusion, In my experience, I totally agree that the key to success in trading and civilization is reporting and it

also

has a wide variety of

benefit

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benefits

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for the

overall

country

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evolution and financial resources.