The graph below shows the percentages of tourists who used different types of transport to travel within a particular nation between 1989 and 2009. Each tourist may have used more than one type of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the proportion of
tourists
using five different types of transport to travel
around a
mentioned nation from 1989 to 2009. It is noticeable that Correct article usage
the
tourists
may have used more than one kind of transport.
Overall
, it could be seen that there were upward trends in the percentage
of all forms of transportation, except for air travel
. While
tourists
travelling by car contributed the highest percentage
, the opposite was true that of tourists
using ferries.
To begin
with, there were around 50% of people
travelling by car in the first year of the period, then
reached a peak at the level of 60% in 1999, which was the highest percentage
through the period. However
, this
proportion sharply declined by roughly 10% and ended with the second rank after the percentage
of people
using the railway. Although
the portion of tourists
that travelled by rail within the country was over 30%, under that of people
travelling by airline, this
percentage
soared to nearly 60% after 20 years.
Looking at the rest, the use of coach and ferry shared similar trends. While
the former witnessed an increase from 10% to under 30%, the latter went up to over 10%, then
slightly decreased to under 10% in 2009. The only transportation people
used to travel
within a nation experiencing a downward trend was air travel
, from 40% to nearly 20%.Submitted by phuonglinhlp.0900 on
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