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The table below shows the preferred TV programs by the different age groups in a european country in 2012.

The table below shows the preferred TV programs by the different age groups in a european country in 2012.
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The table compares the popularity of 6 TV programs among 3
age
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 ranges in a European country in 2012.
Overall
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, It can be asserted that cartoon is the most favorable program for 11-
15
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15-year-old
years
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 old children with 29%
while
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 the
news
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 percentile is only 6%. The other
age
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 ranges like 15-20 and 21-25 prefer to watch feature films and
news
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 with 19% to 23% percentile respectively.
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, the popularity of TV programs
such
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 as
news
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 and TV dramas is increasing as
age
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 goes up.
According to
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 the table,
while
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 cartoon has the most shares with 29% between the 11-15
age
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 group, their audience has fallen to 18% in the 15-20
age
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 group.
This
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 figure has dramatically decreased to 4% in people between the ages
21
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of 21
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-25
years
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 old.
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,
news
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 follows a reverse pattern, starting at 6% among 11-15
years
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 old, and ultimately reaching 23% in 21-25
years
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 old adults.
This
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 percentage for other programs like
features
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feature
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 films, soap operas, and sports fluctuates between 18%-23%, 12%-19%, and 18%-22% respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, years, news with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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