The two pie charts below show the percentages of industry sectors' contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.
The given charts illustrate the value of industry sectors’ contribution to the economy of Turkey from 2000 to 2016.
At first glance,
it is clear that
, at the beginning of the period, construction was the least
piece, Correct your spelling
last
while
agriculture was a significant segment and Trade, Utilities and Transportation was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
average
division. In comparison, Correct article usage
the average
at the end
of the interval, Healthcare and Education became the largest number and the lowest source was Finance, Business and other.
Industry sectors' contribution by agriculture comprised 24% in the first year and this
showed a slight decrease of 10% to 14% in 2016. In 2000 construction at 3% which rose gradually to 10% 16 years later and average
segment Correct article usage
the average
which
Trade, Utilities and Transportation Correct pronoun usage
apply
grow
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grew
up
2% to 16%
With regard to the remaining methods of sector contribution Finance, Business and other, there was an approximate 3% Change preposition
by
an
increase to 8%, Correct article usage
apply
on the other hand
, Healthcare and education increased 0
% and levelled off Change preposition
by 0
17
%Change preposition
at 17
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