Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Dear Neighbor, I hope
this
letter
finds you in
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good health. Recently, I received
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mail
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from you in which you
complain
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about the noise coming from my house. First and foremost, I want to inform you that
i
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am a musician by profession. I have to practice a lot in order to improve my
guitar playing
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skills for
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future concerts.
Neverthless
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Nevertheless
,
while
buying
this
house
i
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made
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arrangements to keep my room
sound proof
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. So that no one in the neighborhood can get
disturb
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while
i
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am practicing. Now in your recent
letter
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i
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came to know that those settings are not enough.
Secondly
, I want you to know that
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this
situation was not intentional. I can understand how annoying these past few days were for you. I want to apologize for the
incovenience
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inconvenience
and bitterness you have faced.
However
, I am
also
very thankful to you that before taking any legal action you
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sent me a formal
letter
to point out my mistake.
This
shows how polite and calm you are towards your
neighbors
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. And I appreciate you a lot for
this
kindness and patience you have shown. I once again
formaly
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formally
asking
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for your forgiveness and assure you that
this
mistake will not happen in the future. After receiving your
letter
i
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immediately started looking for
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options to overcome
this
problem.
This
time
i
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am in search of some good musical companies to some necessary upgrades in my room. So it can become completely
sound proof
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soundproof
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. For
this
purpose, I am already in
talk
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with
on
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organization. They are visiting my home tomorrow
to
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so they can start the process already.
Additionally
, I have decided to stop
practicing
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at home
untill
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until
this
issue will get resolved. I will spend some extra time at the nearby music academy so that no one in the
neighborhood
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can be uncomfortable anymore. I am
also
sending you some good chocolates as an apology and
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a
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very
good next
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door
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neighbor
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have ever met. Yours Sincerely. Araib
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph sticks to a single idea for clarity. The logical flow between paragraphs can be further improved with smoother transitions and clear topic sentences.
coherence cohesion
While the greeting and closing are appropriately formal, ensure to use varied sentence structures and a consistent register throughout the letter.
task achievement
The letter fulfills the task achievement criterion well by addressing all the points given in the prompt. However, make sure to develop each point thoroughly, especially when explaining the actions you will take.
task achievement
The writing tone is mostly suitable, reflecting regret and a desire to resolve the issue. To improve, ensure the tone is consistent and all formal phrases are used correctly.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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