People in many countries are spending more and more time away from their families. Why this is happening? How does this affect people and their families?
Nowadays, a significant amount of
people
tend to live away from their loved ones. The vital reason for this
situation known
to be Add a missing verb
is known
the
career purposes. Correct article usage
apply
Due to
this
fact, lot
of the Correct article usage
a lot
families
lose their bonds with each other.
In this
busy world
plenty of Add a comma
world,
people
lose their private lives due to
their professional needs. This
is very prominent in many developing countries. Because many citizens do not get a good income. Thus
, they have to work over time
to earn more money to survive. Because of increasing their living expenses compared to the income they get, more citizens even tend to move away from their motherlands to find better jobs. Correct your spelling
overtime
For instance
, my best friend's father left them to find a job in another country because her father could not find a good job in my country.
On the other hand
, this
creates a huge impact on family bonds. Number
of Change the article
A number
The number
families
have already lost their family bonds due to
this
situation. Due to
the fact that,
Remove the comma
apply
peple
have to engage in their professions most of the time, they are going to miss valuable opportunities with their Correct your spelling
people
families
. In addition
, some children lose their parents
love and care, which Change noun form
parent's
parents'
bulid
up countless psychological Correct your spelling
build
builds
diformitieds
inside of their minds. Correct your spelling
deformities
Furthermore
, many of them do not even care about their parents. For example
, one of my patient
was there at my ward who had two daughters, but no one came to visit him Change to a plural noun
patients
untill
he was dead in the ward. After his Correct your spelling
until
death
I have known that he was not present in their lives Add a comma
death,
untill
recentlyCorrect your spelling
until
,
because he was very busy with his profession as a policeman.
To summarize, Remove the comma
apply
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
people
miss their families
while
earning money. Consequently
, they are losing their family bond during the process. Therefore
, people
must engage and live with their families
, otherwise
they will lose their loved ones without even knowing.Submitted by darshanadnj20 on
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