A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
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such
as honour,kindness and trust
became
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and physical appearance.I completely agree with the latter notion ,but i
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The primary reason is that nowadays in society humans are basically giving their opinions, by seeing the Verb problem
are
status
of the person.If person
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a person
the person
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they will not punish them rather they will support them.For Instance
,mostly we see celebrities commit crimes for which they will not get punished because of their status
and the publicity they have.Furthermore
, people
will treated differently when using public transport.If the person is wealthy they will be prioritised and treated with the utmost respect.In contrast
,lower-class people
will left alone and neglected if they pay the same price.To illustrate,in many cultures lower income people
are not welcome.
I completely disagree that kindness and trust
have less importance in society.Moreover
, characteristics play a crucial role in human life. Additionally
,there are humans who sacrifice their lives for honesty. In fact, in the modern world ,these characteristics of people
are more welcome in the organization. For example
,there are many organizations that believe in honesty and trust
the successful achievements and in the same way they give rewards to their employees because of their kindness and trust
in their successful achievements.
In conclusion, Most of
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people
will judge others according to
their status
and physical appearance rather than on their honesty and trust
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