some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones. is this a positive developement or a negative one?
The
use
of mobile phones
among the children has become quite common nowadays. While
some schools have restricted its use
on campus to make children’s life better,
and help them to improve focus and concentration. In my opinion, the ban Remove the comma
apply
of
using mobile Change preposition
on
phones
will have a positive development for the well being
of kids.
Restricting the Add a hyphen
well-being
use
of phone
in the classroom itself can improve the concentration of Fix the agreement mistake
phones
students
. There will be no distractions for students
that can trigger their mind
to check their Fix the agreement mistake
minds
phones
. For instance
, when I am trying to study on my laptop, my mind constantly forces me to check on Instagram repeatedly. Even if I had recently closed the app, it still triggers my mind to check again and this
same phenomenon will occur in the classroom, if the student will have
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phone
in their pocket. These distractions will disturb the focus, and Add an article
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the phone
also
the grasping power will get compromised. It may cause the
adverse effect on Correct article usage
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academic progress as well. A complete ban on Correct article usage
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phones
during the
class frees the learners from the habit of compulsive checking and will improve their ability to concentrate.
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Furthermore
, due to
the unavailability of the phone, students
will try to connect more with their peers and also
, can make a strong bond with them. When I was a kid, phones
were not allowed in our classrooms and because of that
all the Add a comma
that,
students
used to share their knowledge with each other. And because of that, we have a large network in our adulthood and also
lots of memories to talk about. The friendships made during childhood are very pure and those friends can help to solve any of the problems which we may face during our adulthood. These strong bonds can only be made if the distractions were
eradicated during the schooling period.
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phones
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the
essential part of our lives but restricting their Correct article usage
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will have many positive developments. It will improve their academics, strengthen their friendships and will engage in healthier pursuits.Fix the agreement mistake
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