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The chart below gives information about how people aged25-34 are housedin the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below gives information about how people aged25-34 are housedin the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The presented graph describes the ratio of homeowners and renters from 2004 and 2014. The data was derived from people aged between 25 to 34 in the UK.
Overall
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, it is evident that the number of individuals owning homes was significantly higher than those who rented, specifically from 2004 to 2012.
However
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, starting in 2013, the number of renters outgrew the homeowners. Upon detailed observation, the biggest gap between renters and homeowners happened in 2004, reaching almost a 40% difference.
In contrast
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, the lowest gap was observed in 2012 with only less than 3% differences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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