The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the unemployment situation in Australia in the year 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph depicts the percentage of people in 2012 who have not found a job in Australia's rural and urban
areas
.
Overall
, it is clearly apparent that in the village, the rate of people who are unemployed has slowly decreased.
In contrast
,
unemployment
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the unemployment
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rate in the city rocketed in the span of the fourth
quarter
of the year. Turning to the detail, in the rural
areas
people who were jobless in the first
quarter
of 2012 were at their peak. it reached almost 7%, but in the next
quarter
, it slowly dropped to around 4%. Meanwhile, the employment rate in the urban
areas
is increasing from about 2% to 4%. It plummeted to just over 2% in the third
quarter
but suddenly escalated to its peak
in
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the end of the period at almost 5%. In the case of rural
areas
, from the second to the fourth
quarter
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quarter,
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it fluctuated but hovered around 5% in the
last
quarter
of 2012.
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