The line charts give information about the demand for steel and number of workers employed in a country from January to December.

The line graphs illustrate the steel demand in million tons and the number of employees employed in thousands between January and December.

Overall

, the actual production was higher than that of the actual demand.

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at the end

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it ended up being inverse. In January, the steel

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produced 4,000 million tons and reached a peak of 5,000 in February.

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, its production went down in its initial stage and remained

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until July. In August, it again

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to decline and rose dramatically where it nearly touched 5,000. But,

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a sharp fall in December. As compared to the production, the actual demand was precisely half, which accounted for 2,000 million tons

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the first month.It fluctuated throughout the year but surpassed

at the end

.  Taking a closer look at the second graph,

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5,000 workers were employed but it reached about 58,000 in the following month.

However

, it fell sharply and reached 3,000 in March and remained constant and again fluctuated and ended up

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1,000 in December.