The line graphs illustrate the steel demand in million tons and the number of employees employed in thousands between January and December.
Overall
, the actual production was higher than that of the actual demand. Linking Words
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the period
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it ended up being inverse.
In January, the steel Add a comma
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was
produced 4,000 million tons and reached a peak of 5,000 in February. Unnecessary verb
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Then
, its production went down in its initial stage and remained Linking Words
same
until July. In August, it again Correct article usage
the same
tend
to decline and rose dramatically where it nearly touched 5,000. But, Wrong verb form
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a sharp fall in December.
As compared to the production, the actual demand was precisely half, which accounted for 2,000 million tons Wrong verb form
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at
the first month.It fluctuated throughout the year but surpassed Change preposition
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at the end
.
Taking a closer look at the second graph, Linking Words
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initially
5,000 workers were employed but it reached about 58,000 in the following month. Add a comma
initially,
However
, it fell sharply and reached 3,000 in March and remained constant and again fluctuated and ended up Linking Words
with
1,000 in December.Change preposition
at