The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, anamake comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000*20.., and future projections for 2025.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, anamake comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
The chart illustrates
main
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the main
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exports
for Southland for the years 2000 ,
2020
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and 2020
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and expected
exports
of
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for
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2025.
Dairy
products
is
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are
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the main export for Southland in all the years.
Meat
products
are the least exported product. International
tourism
is expected to gradually increase in the year 2025 as it did in 2020. There was a significant increase in
exports
of
dairy
products
2000
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from 2000
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to 2020.
Meat
products
exports
are likely to continue to slightly fall as they did from 2000 to 2020. There was a major increase
of
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in
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dairy
products
exports
from around 7.1
billion
to 10
billion
in 2020. International
tourism
improved
with
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by
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about 1.3
billion
in 2020.
Meat
products
had a slight decrease from 6
billion
to 5.2
billion
. In 2025 international
tourism
will be the main export for Southland overtaking
dairy
products
,
meat
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and meat
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products
exports
will continue to fall gradually as they did in the past.
Dairy
products
exports
will decrease in the future, leaving the number
spot
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one spot
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to
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for
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international
tourism
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, dairy, products, meat, tourism, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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