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The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, anamake comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, anamake comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates
main
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exports
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 for Southland for the years 2000 ,
2020
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and 2020
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 and expected
exports
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of
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for
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 2025.
Dairy
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products
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is
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 the main export for Southland in all the years.
Meat
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products
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 are the least exported product. International
tourism
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 is expected to gradually increase in the year 2025 as it did in 2020. There was a significant increase in
exports
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 of
dairy
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products
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2000
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from 2000
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 to 2020.
Meat
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products
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exports
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 are likely to continue to slightly fall as they did from 2000 to 2020. There was a major increase
of
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dairy
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products
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exports
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 from around 7.1
billion
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 to 10
billion
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 in 2020. International
tourism
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 improved
with
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 about 1.3
billion
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 in 2020.
Meat
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products
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 had a slight decrease from 6
billion
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 to 5.2
billion
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. In 2025 international
tourism
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 will be the main export for Southland overtaking
dairy
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products
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,
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meat
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and meat
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products
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exports
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 will continue to fall gradually as they did in the past.
Dairy
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products
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exports
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 will decrease in the future, leaving the number
spot
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one spot
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to
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 international
tourism
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, dairy, products, meat, tourism, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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