The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000*20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, anamake comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
The chart illustrates
main
Correct article usage
the main
exports
for Southland for the years 2000 , 2020
and expected Correct word choice
and 2020
exports
of
2025.
Change preposition
for
Dairy
products
is
the main export for Southland in all the years. Change the verb form
are
Meat
products
are the least exported product. International tourism
is expected to gradually increase in the year 2025 as it did in 2020. There was a significant increase in exports
of dairy
products
2000
to 2020. Change preposition
from 2000
Meat
products
exports
are likely to continue to slightly fall as they did from 2000 to 2020.
There was a major increase of
Change preposition
in
dairy
products
exports
from around 7.1 billion
to 10 billion
in 2020. International tourism
improved with
about 1.3 Change preposition
by
billion
in 2020. Meat
products
had a slight decrease from 6 billion
to 5.2 billion
.
In 2025 international tourism
will be the main export for Southland overtaking dairy
products
, meat
Correct word choice
and meat
products
exports
will continue to fall gradually as they did in the past.
Dairy
products
exports
will decrease in the future, leaving the number spot
Correct pronoun usage
one spot
to
international Change preposition
for
tourism
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, dairy, products, meat, tourism, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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