18.The line graph below shows the percentage of people in Africa subscribing to mobile and fixed-line phones from 1994 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

18.The line graph below shows the percentage of people in Africa subscribing to mobile and fixed-line phones from 1994 to 2004. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the proportion of African individuals who subscribed to cell phones and
fixed-line
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phones between 1994 and 2004.
Overall
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, it is clearly observable that the subscriptions of both categories went up over the 10-year period. The year 2001 marks the point at which mobile subscription overtook
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. In 1994, the percentage of people who subscribed to
fixed-line
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stood at exactly 1.7%,
whereas
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that of cell phones was lower at 0.06%. Over the following seven years, the figure for
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saw a steady rise of approximately 0.9.
However
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, during the same period, there was a substantial increase from 0.06% to well under 3% in the percentage of mobile subscribers. In 2001, the figure for mobile subscribers exceeded that of
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. From
this
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year to 2004, the percentage
African
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of African
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inhabitants subscribing to mobile soared by nearly 5%.
In contrast
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, the growth of
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was minimal and it just reached the proportion of 3.1%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fixed-line with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Line graph
  • Percentage (%)
  • Subscribers
  • Mobile phone
  • Fixed-line phone
  • Trend
  • Increase/Decrease
  • Growth
  • Milestone
  • Overtake
  • Telephone infrastructure
  • Rapid expansion
  • Accessibility
  • Technological advancement
  • Telecommunications
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