This line graph illustrates the number of tourists who visited Caribbean islands between 2010 and 2018, measured in millions
The line graph provides information about the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
tourists
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in
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on
Caribbean
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the Caribbean
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island
from 2010 to 2017.
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islands
Overall
, the total number of Linking Words
tourists
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in
Caribbean Change preposition
on
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island
had a steady increase over the period given. Fix the agreement mistake
islands
Additionally
, Linking Words
tourists
who stayed on cruise ships experienced Use synonyms
a
significant growth and had the highest amount of visitors Remove the article
apply
in
the end of Change the preposition
at
period
compared to Add an article
the period
who
stayed on Correct pronoun usage
those who
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island
.
In 2010, the total amount of Add an article
the island
tourists
was one million and Use synonyms
then
the figure began to rise steadily until it reached its highest point of three point five Linking Words
millions
in 2017. In the early Change to singular
million
of
period, the Change preposition
apply
visitors
who stayed on cruise ships was the lowest compared to Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
tourists
staying on Use synonyms
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island
. The figure grew to 0.5 million by 2011However, by 2017, the number experienced a rapid increase to two Add an article
the island
millions
.Change to singular
million
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