The line chart below shows the public transport usage in four major cities around the world from 1980 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart given illustrates the common approximately 45. increase until the
transpotasion
which has Correct your spelling
transportation
usaged
in Tokyo, New York, London, Correct your spelling
usage
Correct word choice
and Sdyney
Sdyney
from 1980 to 2019. Correct your spelling
Sydney
Overall
, Tokyo is
the highest usage Verb problem
has
transport
compared to other cities.
In 1980, people who Change preposition
of transport
are
using Wrong verb form
were
publict
Correct your spelling
public
tranportasion
about 11 Correct your spelling
transportation
points
. Then
in the
1985, it Change the article
apply
was has
Change the verb form
had
increase
by one point Change the verb form
increased
slighty
11. After 5 years, it rose exactly 20 Correct your spelling
slightly
points
. While
in 1995, it has
increased Unnecessary verb
apply
around
23. Change preposition
to around
However
in 2000, it Add a comma
However,
has
declinedUnnecessary verb
apply
experinces
slightly about 21. Correct your spelling
experiences
experience
Futhermore
, it Correct your spelling
Furthermore
has grown
in 2005 Wrong verb form
grew
about
35, Change preposition
to about
subsequently
, it has
increased in 2010Unnecessary verb
apply
Change preposition
to
Then
it has
experienced growth Unnecessary verb
apply
exactly
50 Change preposition
of exactly
in
the Change the preposition
at
end
of period
. Add an article
the period
On the other hand
, London has significantly rose
Wrong verb form
risen in
a
number of usage public transport Correct article usage
the
started
about 15 Wrong verb form
starting at
points
in 1980. There it is increasing
significantly until the Wrong verb form
increased
end
of period
.
Add an article
the period
Futhermore
, New YorkCorrect your spelling
Furthermore
city
Capitalize word
City
is
the Verb problem
had
thrid
number of Correct your spelling
third
higher
commuters transportation in the world around 20 Correct word choice
apply
points
in 1980. Whereas
, it has increased during the 20 years ( about 25, 30, 39, and 41). However
in 2005, it Add a comma
However,
has
decreased Unnecessary verb
apply
about
40 Change preposition
by about
points
. In 2010 it is
experiencedUnnecessary verb
apply
Correct article usage
an
end
of period
in 2019 Add an article
the period
a period
approximately
50 Change preposition
by approximately
points
. Moreover
, Tokyo has
started almost Unnecessary verb
apply
quarter
of 30 Correct article usage
a quarter
points
in 1980. In addition
,it has been rose significantly in 1958,1990,1995,2000,2005,2010 ( exactly 30,40,50,55,60,70, and 75) until the end
of period
2019 about 79 points
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words points, end, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 3 times.
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