The line graph gives information relating to the average number of British travelers using car, bus and train to commute on a daily basis over a period of 6 decades, starting from 1970.
The line graph compares the mean quantity of British commuters using different
kind
of transportation every day from 1970 to 2030.
Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
Overall
, the usage of both cars and trains has an increasing tendency, whereas
bus statistics consistently decreases
Wrong verb form
decreased
during
the years. Change preposition
over
Additionally
, the same number of people traveled
by buses and trains in around 2015.
Change the spelling
travelled
To begin
, the most popular type of transport, during the whole period of time, was cars, starting from around 5 commuters a day in 1970. Then
, the number leaped
to 7 in 2000, staying unchanged till 2010, growing Change the spelling
leapt
further
to 9 in 2030.
Looking at the bus and car figures, it becomes obvious that it was more popular to utilise cars (about 5 travellers),
than buses (just under 3) at the start of the period. Remove the comma
apply
However
, this
situation will be changed by 2030, where individuals will chose
trains, at 5 commuters, over buses, at slightly below 3 people per day.Change the verb form
choose
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