The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
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The bar chart compares the statistical information about the most well-known countries regarding the
production
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and usage of
electricity
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in
billion
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kWh
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in 2014. At first glance, china had the highest figures for using and producing technology the US is in second place after that. In Korea,
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rate is less than
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countries. By far the most important country for feeding and using
electricity
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during a year is China which produced 5398
billion
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kWh
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of
electricity
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and consumed 76
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kWh
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lower than its
production
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. In the United States, the figure for the consumption of
electricity
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was less than the
production
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at 3866. In 2014, it can be seen that in Russia the proportion of both using and producing
electricity
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was almost equal. What stands out is Korea has the
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consumption and
production
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of
electricity
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with about 500 and 450
billion
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kWh
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respectively.
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, in Germany, the rate of consumption was more than the
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, unlike in other countries. Brazil, France, Canada, India, and Japan approximately had the same proportion.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, electricity, billion, kwh with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • megawatt-hours (MWh)
  • electricity grid
  • renewable energy sources
  • fossil fuels
  • energy efficiency
  • consumption patterns
  • power generation
  • industrial demand
  • residential use
  • transmission losses
  • energy imports
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • energy policy
  • capacity
  • infrastructure
  • demand and supply
  • electrification
  • energy security
  • grid reliability
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