The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart shows the proportion of
citizen
in The Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia residing in cities between 1970 to 2020, Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
as well as
the forecasts for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
, the trend
for all countries increased from the early period until the end of prediction
year, except one of them, The Philippines, witnessed a fluctuation before steadily Correct article usage
the prediction
rose
again.
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the
three countries which are Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia have a rising Correct article usage
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trend
of people living in the cities from 1970 to 2040. Malaysia witnessed a significant jump starting from 1990 until the year 2024 and continue
to rocket until 2040. Wrong verb form
continued
This
trend
is much likely the same as Indonesia, only with around 10% to 15% lower proportion at all times. On the other hand
, Thailand experienced a
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quiet
slight growth between 1990 to 2020 and Correct your spelling
quite
foreseen
to have a big leap until 2040 to almost a 20% difference.
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contrary
, The Philippines did not always have a climbing Correct article usage
the contrary
trend
. It dramatically went up from 1980 to 1990 with approximately 30% to almost a
half, Correct article usage
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then
it gradually went down until 2010 to around 40%. Afterwards, it rose again with moderate
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a moderate
trend
until 2024 and predicted
to continue to rise until 2040.Add a missing verb
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