The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the numer of new shops that opened in one coutry between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant,
The diagram depicts information about the unequivocal of shop
closures
and openings
in a particular country over a 7-year period.
Overall
, a noticeable fluctuation was witnessed in both categories with a downward trajectory. Although
the open shops were initiated at a higher number, the proportion of that in the end year was surpassed by the closed markets.
Regarding the line chart, the shop closures
and openings
started at about 6,500 and 8,500 respectively. However
, the latter fell steeply in the following year, dipping at
just below 4,000, before demonstrating an increase Change preposition
to
subsequently
reaches
6,000 in 2014. Wrong verb form
reached
By contrast
, the market closures
showcased a steady decrease before and after growing by about 1,000 between 2012 and 2013.
Furthermore
, 2015 was when both facets dropped particularly the number of shops that closed which hit a rock bottom (below 1,000). While
the market openings
levelled off at 4,000 after the decline, the other jumped to around 5,000. The remaining year showed that both categories experienced a discernable oscillation before concluding at 5,000 and 3,000 for the number of shop closures
and openings
respectively.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words closures, openings with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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