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The graph shows average annual percentages of online adults who use different social networks. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph shows average annual percentages of online adults who use different social networks. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given line chart depicts
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information about online adult's social media usage from 2012 to 2016.
Overall
, the online adult
users
 of
given
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 4 social media platforms increased during the given time period
while
 the
users
 of
facebook
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Facebook
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 saw a significant increase.
To begin
 with , the proportion of online elders who used
facebook
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 in 2012 was nearly 3 times higher than the
users
 of other platforms and it dramatically rose from nearly 65% in 2012 to 80% in 2016.
Linkedin
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LinkedIn
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 was the second popular social media platform in 2012 at just
abov
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above
about
 20%,
while
 the rest stood nearly at 15%. Moving to the other platforms, the
users
 of
pinterest
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 surpassed
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linkedin
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LinkedIn
users
 in 2014 (nearly
at
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25%) and remained almost similar until the end of the period.
Moreover
,
Instregram
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Instagram
 almost doubled its online adult
users
durig
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during
 the period
whereas
 Twitter experienced a slight increase
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 its
users
 from nearly 15% to just above 20% in 2014 before
remainning
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 until the end.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words users with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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