The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the number of households by their annual salary in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
, according to
the data which
taken Correct pronoun usage
apply
form
Correct your spelling
from
US
, it can be seen that the amount of money for some Correct article usage
the US
of
citizens who had less than $25,000 is the least, Change preposition
apply
while
tha
share of salary for some populatian Correct your spelling
the
whi
had $1000,000 million or more is the biggest over the 3 years.
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who
Initially
, the share of salary of the people who had $75,000-$99,999 was approximately 15% in the 3 years, whereas
the amount of income for those who had $50,000-$74,999 was about 20% then
. Furthermore
, according to
the people who their
annual income was $25,000-$49,999, Correct pronoun usage
whose
initially
was around 20% and the following year minimaly
increased by 5% Correct your spelling
minimally
minimal
finally
in 2015 witnessed a minimal decline to 27%.
Meanwhile, the proportion of people who had $75,000-$99,999 was less than $25,000 fluctuated
between 25% and 30%. Wrong verb form
fluctuating
In addition
, the share of those who had $100,000 or more million income, initially
was
25% and Unnecessary verb
apply
smal
increased to approximately 27% in 2011Correct your spelling
small
,
and Remove the comma
apply
then
experienced a peak to
Change preposition
of
the
33% in the final year.Correct article usage
apply
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