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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the number of households by their annual salary in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
,
according to
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which
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taken
form
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from
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US
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the US
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, it can be seen that the amount of money for some
of
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citizens who had less than $25,000 is the least,
while
tha
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the
 share of salary for some populatian
whi
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who
 had $1000,000 million or more is the biggest over the 3 years.
Initially
, the share of salary of the people who had $75,000-$99,999 was approximately 15% in the 3 years,
whereas
 the amount of income for those who had $50,000-$74,999 was about 20%
then
.
Furthermore
,
according to
 the people
who their
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 annual income was $25,000-$49,999,
initially
 was around 20% and the following year
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minimally
minimal
 increased by 5%
finally
 in 2015 witnessed a minimal decline to 27%. Meanwhile, the proportion of people who had $75,000-$99,999 was less than $25,000
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 between 25% and 30%.
In addition
, the share of those who had $100,000 or more million income,
initially
was
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25% and
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small
 increased to approximately 27% in 2011
,
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 and
then
 experienced a peak
to
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the
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33% in the final year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "according to, initially".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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