The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams per week), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.
The line graph provides data about the
consumption
of hamburger
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hamburgers
fish
and chips
and pizza
in Britain from 1970 to 1990.
Overall
, initially
the highest Add a comma
initially,
consumption
rate
had pizza
, whereas
the lowest consumption
rate
had hamburger
.
As can clearly be seen, in 1970 the highest Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
consumption
rate
had
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was
pizza
. The consumption
rate
was 300 grams
. After 1970 the consumption
rate
of pizza
started to decrease and in 1990 the consumption
rate
was approximately 200 grams
. The consumption
rate
of fish
and chips
initially
was less than 100 grams
, however
, it started to increase over the years and in 1990 was its peak. In 1990 the consumption
rate
of fish
and chips
was 500 grams
.
In 1970, the lowest consumption
rate
compared to other types of fast food in Britain had
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was
hamburger
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hamburgers
consumption
rate
was more or less 50 grams
. In 1980 the rate
rose and was almost 100 grams
. From 1980 to 1985 the rate
gradually increased. From 1985 to 1990 the rate
abruptly rose from 100 grams
to 300. In 1990 the highest consumption
rate
had fish
and chips
(500 grams
), while
the lowest consumption
rate
had pizza
with the rate
of roughly 200 grams
.Submitted by tmargaryan2006 on
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