The chart below compares the percentage of time Australian mothers and fathers spent helping their children with four activities in 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram shows the proportion of
time
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parents in Australia spent assisting their Correct article usage
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children
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games
and preparing for bed in the year 2013.
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mothers
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children
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fathers
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time
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children
with their Use synonyms
games
.
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in
assisting their young stars with dressing. Change preposition
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fathers
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mothers
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children
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Further more
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fathers
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of
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fathers
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, children, games, mothers, fathers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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