The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The line graph shows the percentage of people living in cities between 1970 and 2040. The figures are expressed in percentages (%).
Overall
,
it is clear that
the four
countries
experienced the same increasing trends in the time period.
Malaysia
had the highest figure within the 70-year span,
while
the lowest one belonged to
Indonesia
. From 1970-2010, the number of population in
Malaysia
surged, almost doubled, rising from approximately 30% to just below 90%. In the same timeframe, Thailand and
Indonesia
experienced a comparatively moderate increase,
while
Indonesia
had the same percentage as
Malaysia
in 2010.
In contrast
, the Philippines experienced fluctuations throughout that period of time. By the year 2040,
Malaysia
is forecasted to reach its maximum point by 2040 and will prevail over other
countries
. When it comes to the remaining
countries
,
Indonesia
is expected to rocket its number by around 20 %, and the other two
countries
will encounter a gradual rise of around 10%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, malaysia, indonesia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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