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The bar chart shows the number of overseas students enrolled in a third year Computer Science course at a Canadian college. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the number of overseas students enrolled in a third year Computer Science course at a Canadian college. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the amount of third-year international
students
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 who are studying Computer Science course at a Canadian college who are from Singapore, Malaysia, China ,Sri Lanka and France. It is clear from the graph that there are two factors to compare overseas
students
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 in
this
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 program which are the gender and the study option. These options are Networking and
Database
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 options.
Also
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, the data represents fluctuations in the
number
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 of
puipls
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people
 in different drivers. There is a noticeable difference between
Chinese
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students
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 and French
students
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 whether they are males
of
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or
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 females.
Chinese
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 are hitting the highest
number
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 of
students
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 who are enrolling
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this
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on this
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 course almost 17
students
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.
However
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, French
students
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 have the lowest
number
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 of
pupils
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 nearly 5
pupils
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 . A closer examination of the figures for
Chinese
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students
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 reveals the greatest proportion of
pupils
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 who enrolled in Networking and
Database
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 options about 7 female
students
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.
On the other hand
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, males are dedicated more
in
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to
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 the
Database
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 option which is about 7
students
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.
However
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, female
students
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of
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in
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 Malaysia have the lowest
number
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 of
students
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 who are studying
Database
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 which is about 1 student in comparison to French females which are almost 3
pupils
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.
This
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 chart shows that
Chinese
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students
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 are the most interested
students
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 who are focusing on
Computer
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the Computer
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 Science program.
In contrast
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, French
students
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 are not interested in it.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, database, number, chinese, pupils with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrollment
  • overseas students
  • third year
  • Computer Science course
  • Canadian college
  • trends
  • plateau
  • significant changes
  • economic factors
  • educational reputation
  • dynamics
  • implications
  • resource planning
  • classroom diversity
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