The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and present

The map illustrates a seaside

village

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of development between 1995 and now.

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,

a

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the

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village

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was developed

by

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with

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more leisure-time activities areas including tennis and golf. There were shopping areas and

fishing

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a fishing

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market in 1995,

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whereas

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but

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these were removed, and

instead

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of that

restaurant

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restaurants

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and apartments are located near the road. A

more

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apply

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closer look at the map in 1995,

fishing

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the fishing

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fort was located in the seashore,

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however

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however,

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it is removed now. In terms of the housing area, it was broadened and more houses were built where it was in the north

side

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, and

main

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the main

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road was expanded to the west

side

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of the

village

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.

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,

forest

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the forest

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park was removed and

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of that golf and tennis fields were established.

Besides

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that there is a hotel

in

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on

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the corner of

main

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the main

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road, which goes to

east

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the east

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side

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of

a

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the

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village

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, car park was added

on

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to

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it. On the opposite

side

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of it, now, the cafe was remained where it was in 1995.