The chart below compares the percentage of time Australian mothers and fathers spent helping their children with four activities in 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar illustrates the data about
frequency
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the frequency
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times of Australian parents (
mothers
,
fathers
and both of them)
to help
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helped
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their
children
doing
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do
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four
activities
(dressing, homework, playing games and preparing for bed) in 2013. The data is presented in percentages. In general, the
mothers
had
the
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a
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bigger proportion of helping
children
than the
fathers
in all four
activities
. Meanwhile, both
mothers
and
fathers
had the highest percentage in two
activities
compared with others. The
mothers
had
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made
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a big contribution to
help
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helping
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their
children
with
the
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a
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total percentage of above 25%. Dressing was the most
acitivity
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activity
that
mother
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the mother
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help with
total
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a total
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time
around
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of around
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75%,
while
playing games was the lowest with only 25%.
Conversely
, the father had the lowest quantity to spend with their
children
in all
activities
with total time below 10%.
Moreover
, playing games was the activity that
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the child
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child
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children
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most spent with both
mothers
and
fathers
with
total
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the total
a total
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percentage of 70%, followed by preparing for bed (50%), dressing (50%) and the
last
homework (38%).
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words mothers, fathers, children, activities with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • time spent
  • Australian mothers
  • fathers
  • helping
  • children
  • activities
  • reading
  • homework
  • playing sports
  • general play
  • comparison
  • 2013
  • significantly
  • difference
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