In most
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the Correct article usage
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countries,
becoming obese and unhealthy.
, some people believe that the government has the
to solve
issue. I disagree with
statement because it is each individual's
to be fit and healthy and their
choices.
In a country, people are responsible for their own
.
InorderCorrect your spelling
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to not
becomingWrong verb form
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overweight.
have to
involveWrong verb form
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in some activities like exercising regularly and
findWrong verb form
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a better diet. Which in response
reflectCorrect subject-verb agreement
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on their
.
,
betterCorrect article usage
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way to escape from obesity and
unhealthyCorrect article usage
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lifestyle is to find a good cope
upChange preposition
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physical activities like sports.
,
's
depends on
theirChange the word
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choice of
they consume on a day to day life. Because
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typeCorrect article usage
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of
they consume
haveCorrect subject-verb agreement
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influenceCorrect article usage
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more Correct quantifier usage
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on their body.
BetterAdd an article
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way to deal with
problem is to eat more
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mealFix the agreement mistake
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of processed foods. Because
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it contains more unhealthy fat and more
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calories which leads to obesity over a period of time.
, research shows that
who consume more real
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foods have better
and fit which compared with
whoCorrect pronoun usage
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consume processed meals.
In conclusion, some people think that
governmentCorrect article usage
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has
responsibilityAdd an article
the responsibility
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to solve the problem of
becomeWrong verb form
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overweight and unhealthy. I disagree with
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because it is
aCorrect article usage
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of each individual and their
choices.