Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, lots of

students

study at universities. Several

students

are willing to study their minor.

However

, others argue that spending their time

to

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self-study and learning for qualifications is rather than studying minor

subjects

. From my perspective, learning

minor

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a minor

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and spending the time to gain the qualifications are significant. The

students

who are eager to study not only their majors but

also

minors, believe that studying minor

subjects

is

also

significant. The

reason

is that

the

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most

of

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jobs are interconnected with the

knowledge

of other majors.

For instance

,

in

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IT

organization

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organizations

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,

they

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not only use their IT technology to organize but

also

use the

knowledge

of

the

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management, finance and other

subjects

to operate their firm.

On the other hand

,

another

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other

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students

argue that contributing to developing their major skills,

for example

, studying for qualifications is more significant and reasonable than studying other major

subjects

. The first

reason

is that most

of

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processional

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the processional

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organizaitons

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organisations

requires

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require

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the

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knowledge

of major

subjects

.

And another

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reason

is that having high skills can be more competitive than other applicants and they can

learn

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earn

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higher salaries. In my opinion,

learnig

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learning

minor

subjects

and concentrating

to

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on

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developing self-skills, both are significant for university

students

.The

reason

is that understanding

of

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other

major

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majors

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can help us read the current trend of the occupation markets.

And another

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reason

concentrating on developing self-skills

helping

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helps

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us improve our major

knowledge

and earn high salaries.

Thus

, both are important for university

studnets

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students

. In conclusion, studying minor

subjects

and concentrating

to

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developing self-skills are

essential

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an essential

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factor

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factors

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for numerous undergraduate

students

and

the

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senior

students

.